Author's note: I just wanted to play with word choice a little so this really isn't a story but just kind of a scene.
The sun was setting quicker than the speed of light itself. I knew this was because of what lay ahead, nowhere I could run to, nowhere I could hide. My heart is a tree struck by lightning, longing to be fixed but far beyond repair. I wait, with hopeless thoughts, for the fog to come and carry me away. I see the sky begin to darken and the fog begin to form. I feel the rain begin to fall and the wind begin to blow. All of a sudden, it stops. Everything at the same time. The rain, the wind, the fog, the darkness, and then, my heart.
WOW! This class really DOES make people write more twisted stories. I remember reading the tea pot piece and thinking how happy it was. Anyway, this is a really thought provoking piece. It balances real emotions with unrealistic events really well.
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